So my coursework is to write a review for a broadsheet newspaper, and I remember my teacher said to make it catchy, but I'm scared that I've made it too informal since its a broadsheet. I've used phrases such as 'Nonetheless, Mephostophilis' joke-shop contact lenses fail to alarm the audience! One gimmick that does pay-off is the effective use of puppets to illustrate the motifs of power and inhumanity', 'Was this done solely to foreground Marlowe's anti-female attitudes? Only Freestone can tell,', 'it leaves us cold', 'spine-tingling' please tell me whether thats too informal?
>>> 100 point bonus! CAN BROADSHEET REVIEWS BE INFORMAL? - 1